【读后续写】手把手教你学会写动作描写（3）动作链A，B，C。

清一色的白简称白色:
姐姐教得好好[星星眼]来交作业啦 She unintentionally turned her head ，spotting his back in the crowd, and rushed to catch up with him in a hurry

【回复】回复 @清一色的白简称白色 :因为3个动作要并列嘛，所以三个动作最好都用ed形式
【回复】回复 @学姐的教学日记 :姐姐第二个不能用非谓语吗，还是说因为有and所以三个动词并列了 [保卫萝卜_哭哭]
【回复】转头也可以用这个动词哈“twist”，第二个动词用spotted 一般过去时
ahyeh:
@学姐的教学日记 Zhu Yun turned around right away, looked at him with amazement and ran to him at first.可以吗[脱单doge]

倥偬挽夏:
She saw his familiar back , dashed out of the door ,and her heart seemed to miss a beat

【回复】回复 @学姐的教学日记 :谢谢姐姐[打call]
【回复】学姐，这个变了一下下，最后一个不是动作描写，可以嘛[呲牙]