【教程】如何提升英语写作「高级感」＊片尾彩蛋

K大人的小石榴:
课代表来啦！！！ 写作的最终目标是convey ideas，而非为某一个单词或者复杂的语法结构而写。 一个好的idea应具备的三大组成部分： 1.Grammar 语法 simple and accurate 2.Diction 措词（即词语的选择） idiomatic 符合表达习惯 metaphoric 善用修辞 3.Sentence structure 句式结构 concise 简明扼要 comparative 有对比 后面就是阿婆主对具体文章的分析啦，值得一看，表白丸子姐姐哈哈哈哈[爱心]

tothemoon19:
His success, a legend, gives the appearance of luck, but essentially is hard work. To me, his legend speaks volumes about devotion and diligence. Everyday,he gets up, rolls up his sleeves, and gets down to his business -- just like a assiduous bee.

【回复】写得好好！不过legend这个词有点夸张了吧哈哈哈
【回复】回复 @过期小王 :an assiduous bee.[呲牙]
Ahaitsme:
交作业 It's not merely good luck that has brought him what he is today. It's blood, toil, tears and sweat that he has offered persistently win him the glory of success.

C2H5OH②:
啊啊啊好喜欢这种类型的干货视频，上一个好文章精读也是！希望能多出这类型的或者搞个干货系列（？）太感谢老师了学到好多！

赤陶:
Unlike those who enjoy basking in approval and admiration, he fends off flattery and flowers from others good-humouredly by attributing his success to a stroke of luck. It is doubtful whether pure luck serves him well as a self-effacing strategy, but one thing is clear: luck alone can by no means take him this far if he fails to cherish his fortune with great diligence and dogged determination.

林中念山:
谢谢丸子姐姐，丸子姐姐15分钟的视频我可能需要1个小时消化[跪了]我们最近也在学修辞，可是我还是只会生硬地先在脑子里用中文想好，然后翻成英文。可能是因为我输入太少，而且练习也太少了吧[微笑][委屈]

【回复】学修辞？是英语专业的吗？
喜久枝:
本来有篇作文我都不想写了，快到截止时间了，但是！今天正好看到这个视频，然后按照视频里讲的去写，我竟然第一次提交就得了95分，这是我今天最开心的一件事情！我惊，我可是从来没有第一次就可以的这么高的分数！太开心了 ！

测评开箱打卡君:
这样挺好哒，相当于第二篇好文精读赏析系列啦，不如就继续下去呀！！！[星星眼]

小云茶树菇:
我照着这个视频写了我本周的写作课作业，拿到我历史以来的最高分，而且我的句法被夸了，真的好实用！！

JadenMilk:
On the surface, his success is due to good opportunities and luck ，but the fact is quite the reverse. Success doesn't happen overnight, seemingly ordinary things often have hidden hardships behind them. Luck have its place ,but it weights little. Opportunities wait for no unprepared men. Success is not an accident but an inevitable result of tireless hard work.

许一世红尘:
想问下up主这些文章都是咋找到的？[星星眼][星星眼]

【回复】好像是scmp大码知道在哪找
每周一个新墙头:
迟来的来交作业！ It may seem that his great cup of achievements are filled by a tap of pure luck or fortune, but I could tell you, he collected water from puddles, lakes, river and finally the four oceans to build up this cup of success.

静默的背影:
交作业 求批改。I definitely won’t deny the fact that his achievement is acquired by arduous efforts ，not by being called a lucky dog. [笑][笑][笑]

当当当当啦:
You can never achieve your success only by luck but through hard work. There are millions of new babies bron to be alive everyday, but there are few of them can grow up to be an successful man. For me, the harder I work, the luckier I am. 不仅仅是词汇的差距，是在表达上就很难了[大哭]

丸子Tina:
早上好鸭！今天大家可以休息消化一下之前的视频，尤其是周一发的这个，【承包了这周学习重点！！】同视频的全英版本已经发在了微博，想练习听力的可以去看，也可以两个视频对照着一起学~！4月加油的孩纸5月就有收获辣！https://m.weibo.cn/1731334483/4488502425676924